Oh, I really love the touch at the end about the cirrus clouds! And all of the little details that would come from a sentient people for whom whiskers were important, like Tear-Mouth not really knowing how to use them and thus getting trapped. Awesome stuff!
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Date: 2009-08-24 05:09 am (UTC)